One aspect of my paper that I am proud of is how I explained how to make the cookies. I feel like I explained exactly what you need to do to make the cookies very well. I think the directions are fairly easy to follow and the way I explained it can let anyone make them. I like this aspect of my paper because the explanations make the topic of the paper make sense and make the cookies possible to make.
The most difficult aspect of my paper was trying to explain what to mix it with. The material I usually mix it with is different from what other people might find easier to mix with. I usually use a fork or a big spoon but usually people use and electric mixer or something else but I don't know what people would prefer.
If I could fix it I would just research what people really use now and I would describe that in my paper. I would just look up what it is called and describe it.
I think if I could revise my paper now I would just add a few more details that were commented on the paper. I would add more description of what my teacher told me to add more of. Other than that I would leave it as it is because I received an A on it and only a few points were lost over the loss of detail in my paper.
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