Monday, October 4, 2010
Compare and Contrast Questions
I am proudest of my body paragraphs because the people because the people who read my paper liked them. They said that my paragraphs were very well organized. The most difficult aspect of writing my essay was trying not to be so repetitive. It was hard not to repeat myself when I was trying to explain everything. I would reword some of my sentences and polish them with different word choices. I would try not to repeat myself so much. I would be more specific. I did not explain as well as I could have. I would research more about the two television shows and compare them more.
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