One aspect of my paper that I am pretty proud of is the way it is written in order. It introduces the background of the story, it tells the story, and then it concludes it with a summary of the main point. The main point of the story is clear. I also like the actual story that I wrote. I like these aspects of my paper because the people who read it said that is what they liked.
The most difficult aspect of my paper was describing the sounds that the car made. I did not know how to describe the sound that I heard when I hit the other car. I also had difficulty describing the car and the way I hit it. I have difficulty when I try to show a story and not just tell it to the audience.
I would reword the sounds and descriptions that I was trying to write out. I would try to polish it to make it more descriptive so that the reader knows most of what I mean. I did not really know how to describe the sounds. I would also try to polish all the other descriptions of what happened and try to “show” the accident instead of just telling it and saying that it just happened.
I would ask my friends to describe the sound and ask them to spell it out or help me. I would also make the sound again and try to sound it out on paper. The sound is really important to my paper because it would help my paper be more descriptive and interesting. The description of me hitting the other car is also important, and I would try to think of ways to make the readers feel like they can actually see the accident happening in their head.
The most difficult aspect of my paper was describing the sounds that the car made. I did not know how to describe the sound that I heard when I hit the other car. I also had difficulty describing the car and the way I hit it. I have difficulty when I try to show a story and not just tell it to the audience.
I would reword the sounds and descriptions that I was trying to write out. I would try to polish it to make it more descriptive so that the reader knows most of what I mean. I did not really know how to describe the sounds. I would also try to polish all the other descriptions of what happened and try to “show” the accident instead of just telling it and saying that it just happened.
I would ask my friends to describe the sound and ask them to spell it out or help me. I would also make the sound again and try to sound it out on paper. The sound is really important to my paper because it would help my paper be more descriptive and interesting. The description of me hitting the other car is also important, and I would try to think of ways to make the readers feel like they can actually see the accident happening in their head.
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